The Calm Before The storm
Raining pitch & sour tara one eyed homely hummel smiles at ahalf pack of Marlborosnine millimeters; an empty bottle of Madeira.Staring at a pair of french demi lune petite commodesrosewood...
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Sounds like that storm is starting! A great build up of images from :'hummel smiles''stops raining'lead-breath panic'withering blood''rotten dreams'a good progression here to build up to a storm. Not...
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First: Welcome Little Friend!!! Second: whewwwwwww.I'm not sure that I'm smart enough to throughly appreciate this piece. *scratching my head*Whewwwwww (did I already say that?)This imagery could keep...
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Thank you so much both of you, for reading and commenting. Shirley, you're more than smart enough to figure things out. Again, thank you both, and Jean, a rare compliment that I so appreciate. It's my...
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Wow, this is so much like a monster roller-coaster ride, it was almost a relief to reach the tears at the bottom.This has a wonderfully informed vocabulary and the richness of images is...
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